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Acknowledgements-This is my first piece of novel I'm creating. Sorry if this novel isn't good with grammar and what not.
Day 1247: (Narrator POV) The day when the Dragon breath and came in the stock of weapons in the shop along with the armour which was costly. It seemed no one used it until a few hours later... One lad named Grunt. He was the only one that was fast,agile and smart secret assassins that took lives of people behind with the chain thunderbolt then use the tabi boots to escape Scott free without being hit. He always had an income of 800-2000 coins per day assassinating and working for an unknown infamous Icarus.... With all the coins Grunt racked up he bought the Dragon breath and the diamond armour. He wasn't the assassin. He became what known as the "Grunt".. Hundreds of people died. Maybe even to the point it's thousands per day. People feared him. No one dared to get in his way or even try to kill him or they would die painfully almost as you was being burned alive. People saw the beam of death and the ashes left behind. They didn't bother fighting back.. You was digging up your own grave if you did. Everyone bought the diamond armour. It was a must have to survive the attacks. They didn't want to feel the dreadful painful agonizng dragon breath.
Day 1264 16:00PM (Fitting music also read a bit slower on this paragraph. Fits in with music)
That was the day I encountered the grunt.. My life was going to end at that point... I thought of my family and the memories I cherished.. I wondered if I would really die like this without fufilling their wish after they died from the infamous Icarus. I felt ashamed of my self. All this time the hard work I did to get these weapons to avenge my family.. My mother and father wouldn't be proud.. It was a promise I made and swore on my own life I would take revenge on the infamous Icarus.. Was I a waste of time? Waste of a flesh? What did I do good in this world I entered? I'm a useless piece of sh**.
A few hours ealier...
12:00 PM: Mike: Yo Phoenix you alright there? You seem worried.
Phoenix: I feel something bad is going to happen in a few hours time.. Like us two could die by the grunt.
Mike: Ah no need to worry man! I've got my missile thrower to shove this rocket down his throat and you could fry him off with the high voltage!
Phoenix: I wouldn't feel so confident.. He kills hundreds of people a day with the mountains of ash left behind that whistles in the cold wind!
Mike:Its been over 20 days and you think we would encounter him? Get your self together man. Don't you want to kill him and avenge your family? You was the last one that survived..
Phoenix: ... Yeah I want to avenge my family.
2 Years ago
Day 534 23:00:
(Fitting music)
The night where my family got assassinated by Grunt. I wanted to go and save my mother.. I didin't care if I died or not. I wanted to sacrifice my life for my mother.. Thats how much i lohttp
/pixelgun3dforums.com/index.php?threads/death-or-life-ch-1.12153/#post-41463ved her. My father refused me to go... Tears just ran down my cheeks... I couldn't do anything..
Then hearing the screams of my mother... I felt my knees trembling and I felt like my soul was draining away as if I was a dead body with no brain. The last words I heard from my mother were "Do something for us so we that we can remember."I kept that in mind... The last words from my father were " Im sorry for never spending time with you but instead I abused you.. Im sorry son.. Im a failure in life.. You see your mother loved me for some reason and I loved her back for her kindness and love. I dont want you to become like a failure in life. But when you get older. But PLEASE remember to move on with your life... Take the coins and use it for your survival. Please.. I want you to live. That's all I ever wished for. But promise me you will take revenge for us.. Goodbye Phil."
15:56 PM
Mike: Awright! We both got 300 coins from killing the hitmen that kill the innocent people!
Phoenix: We have more to eliminate. Perhaps we could celebrate when we kill the entire corp- OH SH** ITS HIM!
My heart stopped beating.. My knees felt like bending down and my entire body was sweating and I had chills down my spine. I stood there like the normal idiots in movies when they are about to die.
Mike: Leg it and split up! The Dragon Breath is cutting through the terrain! He is going to burn our flesh into rotting ash! RUN PHIL!
I rapidly sprinted away from Grunt to avoid death at all costs and kill the Grunt somehow.... But at that moment I was a idiot.. Stopping for slightest second to catch my breath back and get hit by the elephant hunter in my left shoulder clean through and overflowing with warm blood dripping down to the soft green grass. After I was laying there injured like a person begging to live. Grunt slowly walked towards me with a sinister creepy smile...
Grunt: Prepare for a slow painful death.. And I will see you in hell... AHAAAAAHAAAAAH.
I just sat there feeling like my soul was crying.. I didn't fear death but I feared dying in vain...
Please feel free to say the negatives.
Also please let me know if you want more!
Day 1247: (Narrator POV) The day when the Dragon breath and came in the stock of weapons in the shop along with the armour which was costly. It seemed no one used it until a few hours later... One lad named Grunt. He was the only one that was fast,agile and smart secret assassins that took lives of people behind with the chain thunderbolt then use the tabi boots to escape Scott free without being hit. He always had an income of 800-2000 coins per day assassinating and working for an unknown infamous Icarus.... With all the coins Grunt racked up he bought the Dragon breath and the diamond armour. He wasn't the assassin. He became what known as the "Grunt".. Hundreds of people died. Maybe even to the point it's thousands per day. People feared him. No one dared to get in his way or even try to kill him or they would die painfully almost as you was being burned alive. People saw the beam of death and the ashes left behind. They didn't bother fighting back.. You was digging up your own grave if you did. Everyone bought the diamond armour. It was a must have to survive the attacks. They didn't want to feel the dreadful painful agonizng dragon breath.
Day 1264 16:00PM (Fitting music also read a bit slower on this paragraph. Fits in with music)
That was the day I encountered the grunt.. My life was going to end at that point... I thought of my family and the memories I cherished.. I wondered if I would really die like this without fufilling their wish after they died from the infamous Icarus. I felt ashamed of my self. All this time the hard work I did to get these weapons to avenge my family.. My mother and father wouldn't be proud.. It was a promise I made and swore on my own life I would take revenge on the infamous Icarus.. Was I a waste of time? Waste of a flesh? What did I do good in this world I entered? I'm a useless piece of sh**.
A few hours ealier...
12:00 PM: Mike: Yo Phoenix you alright there? You seem worried.
Phoenix: I feel something bad is going to happen in a few hours time.. Like us two could die by the grunt.
Mike: Ah no need to worry man! I've got my missile thrower to shove this rocket down his throat and you could fry him off with the high voltage!
Phoenix: I wouldn't feel so confident.. He kills hundreds of people a day with the mountains of ash left behind that whistles in the cold wind!
Mike:Its been over 20 days and you think we would encounter him? Get your self together man. Don't you want to kill him and avenge your family? You was the last one that survived..
Phoenix: ... Yeah I want to avenge my family.
2 Years ago
Day 534 23:00:
(Fitting music)
The night where my family got assassinated by Grunt. I wanted to go and save my mother.. I didin't care if I died or not. I wanted to sacrifice my life for my mother.. Thats how much i lohttp
/pixelgun3dforums.com/index.php?threads/death-or-life-ch-1.12153/#post-41463ved her. My father refused me to go... Tears just ran down my cheeks... I couldn't do anything..Then hearing the screams of my mother... I felt my knees trembling and I felt like my soul was draining away as if I was a dead body with no brain. The last words I heard from my mother were "Do something for us so we that we can remember."I kept that in mind... The last words from my father were " Im sorry for never spending time with you but instead I abused you.. Im sorry son.. Im a failure in life.. You see your mother loved me for some reason and I loved her back for her kindness and love. I dont want you to become like a failure in life. But when you get older. But PLEASE remember to move on with your life... Take the coins and use it for your survival. Please.. I want you to live. That's all I ever wished for. But promise me you will take revenge for us.. Goodbye Phil."
15:56 PM
Mike: Awright! We both got 300 coins from killing the hitmen that kill the innocent people!
Phoenix: We have more to eliminate. Perhaps we could celebrate when we kill the entire corp- OH SH** ITS HIM!
My heart stopped beating.. My knees felt like bending down and my entire body was sweating and I had chills down my spine. I stood there like the normal idiots in movies when they are about to die.
Mike: Leg it and split up! The Dragon Breath is cutting through the terrain! He is going to burn our flesh into rotting ash! RUN PHIL!
I rapidly sprinted away from Grunt to avoid death at all costs and kill the Grunt somehow.... But at that moment I was a idiot.. Stopping for slightest second to catch my breath back and get hit by the elephant hunter in my left shoulder clean through and overflowing with warm blood dripping down to the soft green grass. After I was laying there injured like a person begging to live. Grunt slowly walked towards me with a sinister creepy smile...
Grunt: Prepare for a slow painful death.. And I will see you in hell... AHAAAAAHAAAAAH.
I just sat there feeling like my soul was crying.. I didn't fear death but I feared dying in vain...
Please feel free to say the negatives.
Also please let me know if you want more!
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