Revonix
ЯενοηΙχ | Яеνοη ЕмрΙяе Leader
My first RP story, hope you enjoy!
(it is short)
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It was a peaceful day at Fet-Ak. Many people were buying from blacksmiths, many people went to the dojo, etc. At around 11:30 AM, Axrak Renan was seen walking through the streets of Fet-Ak. He was there to have a walk and buy weapons.
FACT: Lynx's Sho Naginata was once wielded by a bodyguard of the Dojo of Fet-Ak.
Axrak then entered the Combat Workshop to buy and forge some weapons. He met Yarix Renan, his cousin. Yarix was upgrading his Huwatlas Bow. Axrak then seeks in the workshop window. There, he found some black masked terrorists holding bombs which were covered in brown bags. Axrak saw them close and tighten the bags. Axrak and Yarix cannot combat the terrorists since Axrak has no weapon and Yarix's bow was being upgraded.
FACT: The terrorists were Rage Raiders who were being commanded by Lynx (he was evil that time).
The Renan brothers then told everyone to hide and keep calm. Then, minutes later, Axrak and Yarix decided on who will stay. Axrak decided that it will be him. Yarix trusts his brother that Axrak will survive. After that, Yarix leaves in the South direction.
Axrak tried to combat the terrorists with his bare fists, however, he only killed one out of 200. He tried to escape, but five of the terrorists encountered him and brought him to their Rage Tower. There, Axrak recieved sleeping pills and got hammered in the head. This made him unconscious and fell asleep. He got thrown out of the Rage Tower and fell brutally in a sand area where the 4 bombs which had Dragon Blood will mutate him.
At exactly 1:00 PM, all the bombs exploded. People tried to escape and tried to hide, however, the blast radius of the bombs were too high that they got caught in the explosion. The Rage Clan escaped quickly and were not harmed at all.
Only Axrak remained.
Axrak stood up and noticed all the changes he had. His head mutated into a dragon head. He lost some knowledge. He lost interest of his religion.
He walked in all directions noticing that Fet-Ak became a sand desert. In a distance, there was a large crater which was originally where the Dojo stood. He rushed and found a white, shiny, and long weapon. This was the Rattecan Double Blades (or just a long durable stick with blades on its ends).
He held the weapon for a while, however, he immediately toppled. He had to hold it more to get used of it. He went further just to notice that there are almost no remains. He ran South to his temporary home where all his weapons are.
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(it is short)
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It was a peaceful day at Fet-Ak. Many people were buying from blacksmiths, many people went to the dojo, etc. At around 11:30 AM, Axrak Renan was seen walking through the streets of Fet-Ak. He was there to have a walk and buy weapons.
FACT: Lynx's Sho Naginata was once wielded by a bodyguard of the Dojo of Fet-Ak.
Axrak then entered the Combat Workshop to buy and forge some weapons. He met Yarix Renan, his cousin. Yarix was upgrading his Huwatlas Bow. Axrak then seeks in the workshop window. There, he found some black masked terrorists holding bombs which were covered in brown bags. Axrak saw them close and tighten the bags. Axrak and Yarix cannot combat the terrorists since Axrak has no weapon and Yarix's bow was being upgraded.
FACT: The terrorists were Rage Raiders who were being commanded by Lynx (he was evil that time).
The Renan brothers then told everyone to hide and keep calm. Then, minutes later, Axrak and Yarix decided on who will stay. Axrak decided that it will be him. Yarix trusts his brother that Axrak will survive. After that, Yarix leaves in the South direction.
Axrak tried to combat the terrorists with his bare fists, however, he only killed one out of 200. He tried to escape, but five of the terrorists encountered him and brought him to their Rage Tower. There, Axrak recieved sleeping pills and got hammered in the head. This made him unconscious and fell asleep. He got thrown out of the Rage Tower and fell brutally in a sand area where the 4 bombs which had Dragon Blood will mutate him.
At exactly 1:00 PM, all the bombs exploded. People tried to escape and tried to hide, however, the blast radius of the bombs were too high that they got caught in the explosion. The Rage Clan escaped quickly and were not harmed at all.
Only Axrak remained.
Axrak stood up and noticed all the changes he had. His head mutated into a dragon head. He lost some knowledge. He lost interest of his religion.
He walked in all directions noticing that Fet-Ak became a sand desert. In a distance, there was a large crater which was originally where the Dojo stood. He rushed and found a white, shiny, and long weapon. This was the Rattecan Double Blades (or just a long durable stick with blades on its ends).
He held the weapon for a while, however, he immediately toppled. He had to hold it more to get used of it. He went further just to notice that there are almost no remains. He ran South to his temporary home where all his weapons are.
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